Kaito
New Member
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Post by Kaito on Mar 17, 2008 3:28:25 GMT -5
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Post by Sanada on Mar 17, 2008 17:03:34 GMT -5
okay....
first off...
Your strengths aren't detailed enough, say in what aspects of whatever combat your are good in.
Your weapon and appearance links dont work.
You dont have an age.
The History seems quite short, but is enough to be approved I would think. I'll actually read it when the rest is sorted, cba atm =P
Your Personality isn't detailed enough.
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